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Inside this disused tool-shed in Hammer Wood
slatted walls morse daylight on an earth floor.
Here two local boys find a knife, its blade
freckled in rust. The older boy picks it up,
with its egg whiff of wet metal, and points
to his friend to back against the wall for a trick.
Then the younger boy’s t-shirt is hustled
over his head and rolled into a blindfold.
In its blackness, he imagines the moment held
like a knife above his friend’s head. His friend
who whispers. Don’t. Move. And then
there’s a kiss. Lips quickly snipping against his.
Silence. He’s aware of his chest, the negative
of his t-shirt. He pulls his blindfold. Looks
the older boy full in his up-close face. And sees
that he’s bleeding, everywhere, under his skin.
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From the judges: "Perhaps more than any other poem in the competition, this poem does great work in the white space beneath it, calling out to us as readers long after we have read it. This is achieved by the absolute care of every formal and linguistic choice in the poem. We loved the way we are ushered into the intimate space of the tool-shed, and the way in which details such as the blindfold generate narrative tension. The poem's final sentence is astonishing: violent, beautiful, and managing to pin down, visually and unforgettably, a moment of self-revelation and emotional vulnerability.”
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Inside this disused tool-shed in Hammer Wood
slatted walls morse daylight on an earth floor.
Here two local boys find a knife, its blade
freckled in rust. The older boy picks it up,
with its egg whiff of wet metal, and points
to his friend to back against the wall for a trick.
Then the younger boy’s t-shirt is hustled
over his head and rolled into a blindfold.
In its blackness, he imagines the moment held
like a knife above his friend’s head. His friend
who whispers. Don’t. Move. And then
there’s a kiss. Lips quickly snipping against his.
Silence. He’s aware of his chest, the negative
of his t-shirt. He pulls his blindfold. Looks
the older boy full in his up-close face. And sees
that he’s bleeding, everywhere, under his skin.